MEMOIR

When i was young, i always thought life was like a fairy tale or a cartoon like Tom & Jerry. Tom is a cat and Jerry is a mouse which the two can't be together or the mouse will be eaten. But they hit each other chase each other around the house or other places, but when they injure one another they don't die or start bleeding they still the same but they get squished. When i was five years old my brother and I argued and fought a lot so one day, i was watching Tom & Jerry and Jerry, the mouse, had slammed the door right in tom's face and Tom had his face smooth and shaped then he pulled his nose and it went back to normal. So my brother was chasing me with a "' fake knife" which was a stick and i had went into my moms room, and all of a sudden i slammed the door shut. My brother was on the floor crying, blood was gushing out his nose, and he had knocked out a tooth. My mom came and she had seen my brother on the floor and me cleaning him up, then my brother told her what happened, she ran outside to get a bamboo stick and chased me inside the house like Tom does to jerry. I learned that life, is jot like a fairytale or a crazy cartoon.

may 25, 2011

In Analizing and Inquiry, I label myself Developing because I'm relating my experience on a silly cartoon that was convincing it was alike with true life. Also because I'm summarizing what had happened that day when i slammed my brother with the door. It was also describing how a kids mind is when their young. They might not know how the world is, but they observe or "Invent" new things to do.

        My Structure and Organization was pretty good I give myself a proficient because my story maintains a clear idea of what i was imagining and I am controlling my topic on one certain memory. I use a purpose on why the problem ended up ugly and strategies i used for it. i organized my ideas and put them in order.


        In Command of Language I'll give myself proficient because I am free from grammars. I focus on my story how and why it happened and it mainstains on one topic.